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Sunday, September 8, 2013

Improv 2, Week 2

Iambic pentameter(ish)

The crash of feet upon the cobbled steps
that slicks the wall with sound under the wet
and porous stones, the spiral tapered down
to loose waves who grind and lick the shine off coins
and gives the whirl a green, metallic sheen.


Posted by Diamond at 12:48 PM
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